posted: 12.12.00
Talisman
by Brian Miller.
FADE IN:

(Black and white, set to music: AIR's "Talisman")

INT. ROOM - DAY

We see an extreme close-up of a very nice fountain pen
writing on quality paper. We see cursive scrawl out "MEET
ME", "10:30", "I LOVE YOU" as the camera pans across the
paper.

The paper is taken away and set back down folded with a
lipstick kiss.

DISSOLVE TO:

EXT. BENCH - NIGHT

The same lipstick kiss on the same letter is in the same shot
as before. The camera pulls back a bit to see a man's hands
unfolding it.

We slowly pan up to see a nice suit

CU - FEDORA LYING BESIDE HIM ON THE BENCH

We keep panning up to see the man's face, reading the letter,
eyes moving back and forth.

CU - THE MAN LOOKING UP BLEAKLY INTO CAMERA

XCU - MOUTH SMILING WARMLY (NO TEETH)

XCU - THE LIPSTICK LETTER SLIDING INTO A COAT POCKET.

We see the man stand, silhouetted against a streetlight, look
down and put his hat back on, button up his overcoat, and
start walking.

DOLLY - WALKING FROM FRONT

We see him walking, looking slightly down.

DOLLY - WALKING FROM BEHIND

We see him approach a large building.

He stops in front of the building where a WOMAN SELLING
ROSES
stands.

XCU - CARDBOARD "LOVE FOR SALE - $5" SIGN

XCU - ROSE PETALS

XCU - THE WOMAN'S NOSE SMELLING A ROSE

He continues to the doors and pulls one open.

INT. BALLROOM ENTRANCE - SAME

DOLLY - WALKING FROM FRONT

The man enters the lavish entranceway and continue up the
stairs. He takes his overcoat off, revealing a fine suit, and
hangs it on a rack.

DOLLY - IN ON THE TICKET GIRL

We see a TICKET GIRL sitting at a desk with a cashbox in
front of her. She smiles at the camera as we close in on her.

XCU - TICKET GIRL'S EYES

XCU - TICKET GIRL'S SMILE (TOOTHY)

Over the ticket girl's shoulder, We see the man pay her and
slip his wallet back in his suitpocket. He looks above the
girl to the side of the camera.

DOLLY - WALKING FROM BEHIND

We see the man's back as he approaches some closed doors. As
he stops and starts to open one, we close in on his back,
going to black

INT. DANCE SPACE - SAME

We fade up to a hardwood-floored room filled with dancers
dancing.

SLOW DOLLY IN ON DANCERS, PARTING TO REVEAL A WOMAN

The woman is dressed nicely, wearing careful makeup with nice
jewelry. As we close in on her she looks at the camera and
smiles.

CU - THE MAN'S FACE

We brighten his face as he sees the woman and smiles the same
smile he had when he read the letter (no teeth)

LONG SHOT OF ROOM WITH WOMAN IN THE MIDDLE

We see the man emerge from the crowd to meet the woman in the
middle of the room.

He hands her the rose

XCU - THE WOMAN'S SHOULDER WHERE THE DRESS MEETS THE SKIN,
RUBBING THE ROSE ON HER NECK

XCU - THE MAN'S TIE AT THE NECK.

They embrace like they're about to start dancing. As they
stand there looking into each other's eyes, the other couples
make more and more room until it's just these two alone.

HANDHELD ROTATING AROUND THE COUPLE AS THEY TURN IN PLACE

DOLLY IN AS THEY TURN

LS OF HIM DIPPING HER, THEM SMILING

MS OF HIM DIPPING HER, THEM SMILING

CU OF HIM DIPPING HER, THEM SMILING

Still in dip position, they kiss.

FADE TO BLACK.
BRIAN MILLER
This is a short script that i may actually produce. If you have the bandwidth, I urge you to DOWNLOAD (3.90 MB) the Accompanying AIR song and listen while you read. Thank you.