A short story of just over 4,000 words, inspired by an idea from John Lolis and expanded and written by Brian Miller.
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Download the entire story in Microsoft Word 2000 format.
Critical Response;
"Dude your story is so rad"
-Trapper
"It's a good story =)"
-John
"I read your story, I really liked it"
-Anthony
"I'll probably read it tonight"
-Bob
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